What a transcendent story about the power and beauty of tears. I want to visit Hilma's tomb and sing to her the old Free to Be You and Me song, It's Alright to Cry:
Winston, thank you for publishing this excellent story!
Troy, thank you for weaving humanity together through Hilma's beautiful tears. She is crying for all the things, both named and unnamed. The joy and the sorrow, the tangible and intangible. She shows us they are all one, as are we.
It is a beautiful tale that will live inside of me for a very long time.
Wow, Troy, I loved Hilma's story, delightful and gentle, and once I was reassured there was nothing ominous about to happen, I smiled throughout the "slight dehydration," and "nothing alarming" diagnosis, and could clearly visualise the quiet WHO meeting through Hilma's tears. Beautiful.π
I read this story twice before commenting, and twice it made me smile and cry at the same time. Thank you, dear author, for introducing Hilma to me. Next time, when Iβm sad, happy or simply feel like it, Iβll have a good cry with Hilma. Iβm much too old for imaginary friends, but since Hilma is such a loving, unbiased soul, Iβm sure she wonβt judge me.
I'm really delighted that you have been moved by Hilma's story, she really did spring fully formed out of a wish for more sensitivity and compassion. Thank you so much for your kind words, Zibow!
Troy! of course this was published. I canβt tell you how much Hilma has delighted me. I want to see the world through her tears, to bathe in their pool of sorrows and joys.
Ha! What I mean is, thank you, Winston, for publishing this. Thank you, Troy, for writing it.
Such a lovely and memorable story, Troy! It's part parable, part surreal (MΓ‘rquez-like?), and takes us through a whole life. I also like how you tried on a different voice (at least compared to what I've read of your work so far). πΏπ
What a transcendent story about the power and beauty of tears. I want to visit Hilma's tomb and sing to her the old Free to Be You and Me song, It's Alright to Cry:
"It's alright to feel things
Though the feelings may be strange
Feelings are such real things
And they change and change and change."
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Winston, thank you for publishing this excellent story!
Troy, thank you for weaving humanity together through Hilma's beautiful tears. She is crying for all the things, both named and unnamed. The joy and the sorrow, the tangible and intangible. She shows us they are all one, as are we.
It is a beautiful tale that will live inside of me for a very long time.
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As an adult crier, I sympathize with Hilma.
Wow, Troy, I loved Hilma's story, delightful and gentle, and once I was reassured there was nothing ominous about to happen, I smiled throughout the "slight dehydration," and "nothing alarming" diagnosis, and could clearly visualise the quiet WHO meeting through Hilma's tears. Beautiful.π
Thank you! πππ
I read this story twice before commenting, and twice it made me smile and cry at the same time. Thank you, dear author, for introducing Hilma to me. Next time, when Iβm sad, happy or simply feel like it, Iβll have a good cry with Hilma. Iβm much too old for imaginary friends, but since Hilma is such a loving, unbiased soul, Iβm sure she wonβt judge me.
I'm really delighted that you have been moved by Hilma's story, she really did spring fully formed out of a wish for more sensitivity and compassion. Thank you so much for your kind words, Zibow!
Troy! of course this was published. I canβt tell you how much Hilma has delighted me. I want to see the world through her tears, to bathe in their pool of sorrows and joys.
Ha! What I mean is, thank you, Winston, for publishing this. Thank you, Troy, for writing it.
Thank you my dear, you're the best ππ©πββ¬
Lovely, Troy. Moving. I echo Kate's comment here that this felt part parable, part surreal story. (Dr Ward really must be really old! π)
The power of tears to celebrate as well as to commiserate.
Thanks Nathan! βοΈππ
Such a lovely and memorable story, Troy! It's part parable, part surreal (MΓ‘rquez-like?), and takes us through a whole life. I also like how you tried on a different voice (at least compared to what I've read of your work so far). πΏπ
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So different from your usual, MTF!
Great, that was different.
Loved this!
Oh this was gorgeous! I absolutely adore Hilma!
I just clicked on this story randomly, and I'm so so glad I did - it has utterly made my day - thank you so much!
Thank you Nicole, I loved writing Hilma.
Wonderful! Such a touching story.
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